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    pivotmasters flash

    Post by pivotmaster on Wed Feb 09, 2011 4:10 pm

    okay here is my very first flash not very good but keep in mind i made it in 10-15 minutes and need to look up tutorials on walking here it goes
    #1 http://swfbox.org/view/pbxn3w


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    Re: pivotmasters flash

    Post by Road Kamelot on Thu Feb 10, 2011 11:16 am

    You should make the arms and legs longer, they're so short that it's hard do see any movement.
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    Re: pivotmasters flash

    Post by sage on Thu Feb 10, 2011 5:30 pm

    you need to read/watch a stick construction tutorial.

    THIS one is very nice.
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    Re: pivotmasters flash

    Post by pivotmaster on Fri Feb 11, 2011 7:40 pm

    k i did that while my internet was down and didnt have any tutorials just got it back


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    Re: pivotmasters flash

    Post by Oasis on Sat Feb 12, 2011 11:14 am

    Use a lot more frames. Then when you come to finish it, you can have the animation at around 16 frames per second and it will appear nice and smooth.
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    Re: pivotmasters flash

    Post by pivotmaster on Sat Feb 12, 2011 12:00 pm

    ok im working on a run and punch now but i cant find a good running tutorial i have the punch down


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    Re: pivotmasters flash

    Post by Redcaa on Sat Feb 12, 2011 12:18 pm

    Watch Terkoiz's tuts. They're bril.


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    Re: pivotmasters flash

    Post by pivotmaster on Sat Feb 12, 2011 12:42 pm

    ok ill watch them right now


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    Re: pivotmasters flash

    Post by pivotmaster on Sun Feb 13, 2011 12:48 pm

    Update *Run Loop * tell me what you think i know its not the best and the head fidgets


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    Re: pivotmasters flash

    Post by Pivotphone on Sun Feb 13, 2011 1:20 pm

    the arms look like they are spinning around the body.


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    Re: pivotmasters flash

    Post by pivotmaster on Sun Feb 13, 2011 4:48 pm

    im focusing more on the legs right now ill make one with just the body and legs then a full one i want to get the leg movement down first


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    Re: pivotmasters flash

    Post by sage on Sun Feb 13, 2011 11:26 pm

    you should get rid of the "neck"
    it looks really weird

    the run is very shaky and isn't looped very well. you need to add more frames, it goes by too fast.
    also, ease both the arms and the legs
    and make the head's bobbing a little less dramatic
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    Re: pivotmasters flash

    Post by pivotmaster on Mon Feb 14, 2011 4:21 pm

    ok will do and any good tuts for fire ive been looking for one


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    Re: pivotmasters flash

    Post by pivotmaster on Mon Feb 14, 2011 5:43 pm

    Update*Cinder demo * a character demo i made look at it i hope to go farther with this character when i get better at animating


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    Re: pivotmasters flash

    Post by Ustion on Tue Feb 15, 2011 3:47 pm

    The character barely moved, you could add some more movements.


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    Re: pivotmasters flash

    Post by pivotmaster on Tue Feb 15, 2011 4:29 pm

    ya i know that was like a rough draft


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    Re: pivotmasters flash

    Post by Road Kamelot on Tue Feb 15, 2011 11:08 pm

    You should draw every frame of the fire by hand.
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    Re: pivotmasters flash

    Post by pivotmaster on Wed Feb 16, 2011 2:13 pm

    i know im not very good at fire though any tut recommendations


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    Re: pivotmasters flash

    Post by Road Kamelot on Wed Feb 16, 2011 2:16 pm

    Look at how others do it and try to imitate as good as you can, if you have imageready you can download the video and import it, and then study it frame by frame.
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    Re: pivotmasters flash

    Post by pivotmaster on Wed Feb 16, 2011 2:27 pm

    ok whats imageready


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    Re: pivotmasters flash

    Post by Ustion on Wed Feb 16, 2011 2:32 pm

    ImageReady is a bitmap graphic editor created by Adobe Systems, it works on MAC OS X and Windows.


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    Re: pivotmasters flash

    Post by pivotmaster on Wed Feb 16, 2011 2:33 pm

    ok ill get right on that i really want to get the fire looking good


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    Re: pivotmasters flash

    Post by Road Kamelot on Wed Feb 16, 2011 2:35 pm

    Make sure you take your time with it, dont be afraid to start over if you're displeased.
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    Re: pivotmasters flash

    Post by pivotmaster on Wed Feb 16, 2011 3:05 pm

    ok and are you experienced with flash?


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    Re: pivotmasters flash

    Post by Road Kamelot on Thu Feb 17, 2011 8:44 am

    I know how to use it, I haven't animated with it in quite a while tho'.

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